Hello Amanda my name is Qais from Waikowhai Primary School, I really like the way you have explained the story. Next time you could add writing about what you are talking about. If you would like to see my blog go to wpsqaiso.blogspot.co.nz
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Hello Amanda my name is Qais from Waikowhai Primary School, I really like the way you have explained the story. Next time you could add writing about what you are talking about. If you would like to see my blog go to
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Thank you, I will take this advice into mind.
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