Hey there Amanda, my name is Parwin and I am from Yaldhurst School. I really like your drawing that you have done about the greenhouse effect because it all stands out. Maybe next time you could write why you did it like was it an activity that you have done or did you do it for fun? Anyway, you did a great job, looking forward to your next posts!
My name is Jedi and I am a year 7, at yaldhurst model school. I love how you have used different shapes to make this picture. Excellent job on the sun. Maybe next time you could put why you made this.
But overall you did a great job! keep up the great work.
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Hey there Amanda, my name is Parwin and I am from Yaldhurst School.
ReplyDeleteI really like your drawing that you have done about the greenhouse effect because it all stands out. Maybe next time you could write why you did it like was it an activity that you have done or did you do it for fun? Anyway, you did a great job, looking forward to your next posts!
Thanks for commenting Parwin. I did it in a reading activity.
DeleteNice blogging with you!
Hey there Amanda,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Jedi and I am a year 7, at yaldhurst model school. I love how you have used different shapes to make this picture. Excellent job on the sun. Maybe next time you could put why you made this.
But overall you did a great job! keep up the great work.
Jedi🍀
Thanks Jedi.
DeleteI will take all of your great advice into mind.
Nice blogging with you!